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相信作文大家都不陌生吧，写作文可以让我们和其他人进行无声的交流。写作文时常常要出人意料，题材新颖，好作文除了华丽的辞藻以外明确的主题也是非常重要的。那么优秀的作文我们究竟该如何才能写好它呢？为了让您在使用时更加简单方便，下面是小编整理的“I”，欢迎阅读，希望您能阅读并收藏。

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.

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一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗?

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?

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When I was very young, I was very sensible. I normally help my parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, sweeping the floor, wiping the table, washing dishes, washing clothes, etc. Doing housework helps me get the praise from my parents, which makes me feel satisfied and fulfilled. I also got a workout and developed my hands-on skills.

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I just like a start,although i am so small and far,but i am bright,i am pround of myself.

My name is Sen Guo,im a middle school student,today,let me talk about myself. In my life,i am good at study,because i usually get good grades,and my teachers all like me,so i always feel so lucky and happy.And i like drawing too,although my pictures are not good,but i think OK,i believe myself .So these are my good things.Next,let me tell you my bad things,i am so short and small,also fat,my brother always laugh at me,amd i am not good for myself,because i often think i am so ugly,so i dont like to take pictures,then,i am not so brave,i afraid og my teachers,i afraid to talk in public,because i am so shy.

This is me,a bad but lovely me,so i will start correct them,i believe myself,come on!

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Today I have to get up early, wash and eat breakfast, then go to school by bike. I have four classes at noon. After class, I have lunch at school. Then I have a study class, and I have four classes in the afternoon. When I got home, I had to do my homework first, and my homework was so much that I often wrote about 23:00 at night, and then I had to go to bed. This is my boring day, there is always no time to relax, what is your school life?

今天上学，我必须早早的起床，洗漱过后吃早餐，然后骑着自行车去学校。中午我要上四节课，下课后在学校吃午餐，然后上自习课，下午也有四节课，在6:40放学。回到家，我首先要写作业，作业非常多，经常写到夜晚23:00，之后我不得不上床睡觉。这就是我无聊的一天，总是没有时间放松，你的上学生活是怎样的?

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I and my family_我和我的家人英语作文50字

There are 3 people in my family.They are my father,my mother and me.My father is a policeman.My mother is a housewife.I am a student in xxx School.My favorite subject is English,because I think it is very interesting.I like my family very much.